Acoustic Sensitivity

I'm not much of a fan of pop songs but yours was good. The hey baby seemed like a cliche though but still it was good.

It sounds good. The line flows well. It reminds me a little of Incubus. I don't know why.

The words flow well. This would sound good as a song. Though the words were not that impressive but it sounds okay.

This is kind of flat and doesn't give enough emotions. Also if you ever try giving it music it would sound dull. It would be like rap. But still it ...

Yeah I agree it needs a lot of work especially the first verse. I think it doesn't flow rhythmically enough. The chorus was good but seem cliche. It gives a ...

The Last Dance The night belongs to us. We were trap in a world of our own. But tonight it will change for us. Was it in vain? Was it ...

---In a spring outside the town of Rime--- "Hey let go of me you crazy ugly lady!", Auros said while trying to struggle from the grasp of a lady holding ...

Auros looked at the cat girl but didn't say anything. He then grabbed his knapsack from a table and started walking away from the cat girl. " Sorry, I don't ...

-----In a pub in Rime--- " Sir, I'm not yet finished drinking. It's okay I'll pay you the...", Auros stuttered when he turned his back and saw a girl who ...

---In a town called Rime--- After the incidents that happened in the woods, the blonde man and the fairy decided to go and walked out of the woods. They went ...

I agree with Suzanne. Your message is good but since it's just statements it doesn't move people that much. I think it would be better if you write about a ...

A Bittersweet Summer The summer is here but I feel so cold I feel so lost even in my own home Is this day going to be over? It is ...

But it wasn't the blonde man. It was a zombie. The zombie turned its head around and looked at the cat girl who bit it.

"Have they stopped following us?" the blonde man said. The fairy then replied while after surveying the surroundings, " I think so." "Far out! It's really a crazy world now ...

It was a nice poem. It conveyed your emotion. Yeah, it sounds emo and I like it (laughs). But it's like a typical poem. Nothing really spectacular. Also there are ...